Madison
Clumsy, Helpful, Anti-Social, Independant
Daughter of Paul & Corinne, sister of Paul, Alli, Alexa, Katrina, Michael, Peter, Christian, and Matthew
Lover of taking walks in town, sleeping in late, and autumn
Who feels thankful for long weekends, the lock on my bedroom door, and climbable trees
Who finds happiness in the small things, weird music, and animals of any kind
Who needs adventure, energy to get through the day, and someone to talk to
Who gives not enough back to the world, bad presents with a lot of thought put into them, and not enough attention to the cat
Who fears falling from high places, spiders (big or small), and being forgotten
Who would like to see the sea creatures in Bora Bora, the safari in Africa, and something unforgetable
Who enjoys deep conversations about anything and everything, when it’s raining hard and when it’s snowing
Who likes to wear comfy shorts, sweatshirts, and warm fuzzy boots
Born in Bridgeport CT, resident of Bridgeport & Easton
Ganim
Maddie,
I really liked enjoying your piece! One of my favorite lines that really stood out to me was the line about what you feel thankful for! I could really imagine it in my head all of this and I like how descriptive it is! Now I know that you like climbing trees! I dont think you need to fix anythng becase you were very descriptive and good!
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Maddie,
I really liked enjoying your piece! One of my favorite lines that really stood out to me was the line about what you feel thankful for! I could really imagine it in my head all of this and I like how descriptive it is! Now I know that you like climbing trees! I don’t think you need to fix anything because you were very descriptive and I loved reading this! Overall, good job.
Lucy Witherbee
Maddie,
I really enjoyed your bio-poem. There were many things that I didn’t know about you that I know now. My favorite line is about your fears. I never knew that you were scared of spiders or scared of being forgotten. I also liked the line about you not giving good presents even though you put a lot of thought into the present. Just know that no one will forget you.
Jack Griffiths
Maddie,
I really enjoyed reading your Bio-poem because I can see that you really put a lot of thought into writing it. I really liked the line where you said that you were afraid of being forgotten, I feel like a lot of people share that fear and I know that that will never happen to you. Another thing that I liked was how you were saying that you find happiness in small things because those are usually the best kinds of things and most people over look them and the fact that you notice these small things is great and shows that you look at the world and is very observant. One thing that you could work on is describing what kind of weird music you like to listen to, give the reader an idea of what one song would be. I think that this piece of writing is great and you should keep up the good work.
Ethan Horbury