Funny, crazy, unique and friend
Son of Chuck Johnson and Carla Johnson brother of Tom(age 10) and of Katherine(age 5)
Lover of Italy, Italian food, and soccer
Who feels thankful for a family, AC/DC and a house
Who find happiness in cooking with family, watching superhero movies with my dad and playing the electric guitar with my brother
Who needs a plain bagel with butter and cream cheese every morning, a smoothie, and time to play soccer
Who gives love to his family, advice to his brother, and knowledge to his sister
Who fears heights, clowns and death
Who would like to see his family live a long life, also a happy one, and see my siblings grow up to be successful
Who likes to wear t-shirts, sweatshirts and jeans in the winter
Born in Bridgeport CT resident of Easton
Johnson
Charlie,
I like your piece, and thanks for sharing it. I like the line about you wearing jeans in the winter because I never see you in jeans and don’t like jeans. Think about it: add more information. Why do you like Italy so much?
Mitchell
Charlie,
I really like your piece and thanks for letting me read it. I really like the line about how you are thankful for AC/DC and for adding a link. I also like AC/DC. I also think that it’s great that you added many things about your family and you can build upon that. I think that you can be more consistent about putting commas before the word and. If you can stay consistent on grammar and add more layers to your writing then you will be very successful.
-Aaron
Charlie,
I really like how you gave out all of your brother and sisters ages because not to many people have done that in their bio-poem. I also like how you said you like bagels with cream cheese in the morning because I can also relate to that. Finally I enjoy how you support Italian food a=when you are Italian.
-Sean
Charlie,
Your piece was great and thanks for posting it! I never knew we had so much in common such as AC/DC, superhero movies, food/cooking, and the same fears. I really enjoyed reading all the lines in your piece. One that stuck out to me was
“And see my siblings grow up successful” i’m really glad you feel that way about your siblings. Your piece was marvelous, one thing that can make your writing higher quality is describing a bit more. Like what is your favorite Italian food or whats your favorite AC/DC song. Overall your piece was creative, fun to read, and relatable.
Sofia Goncalves 🙂
Charlie,
I really liked how descriptive your piece was. I also like how you showed how much you cared for your family. One other thing that I liked is how you added a link for the AC/DC website. One thing you should take into consideration is going into more detail. What is your favorite song to play on the guitar? What is your favorite superhero movie? I thought your piece was well written and I was able to connect to it in some areas.
From
Julia Boffa