Joe
Happy, Funny, Caring, Active
Son of Joe and Donna
Brother of sofia 11 henry 5 david 4 mark infant
Lover of quads, Fishing, and my family
Who feels thankful for snow, dogs, and the outdoors
Who finds hapieness in vermont, snowmobiling, and bike riding
Who needs snow, vermont, and a place to fish
Who gives joy, love, and hapieness
Who fears bugs, falling, and astroids
Who would like to see an eclipse, myself graduate, and to see a massive tuna on the end of my fishing line.
Who enjoys vermont, computers, and winter
Who likes to where light shirts, shorts, and sweatshirts
Born in bridgeport, resident of Easton
Autuori
Dear joe
i like how much we have in common. i like in your story when you said you would like to see a big tuna on the end of your line. i agree with you that we need more places to fish
Joe,
I really liked reading your bio poem. My favorite line was “to see a massive tuna on the end of my fishing line”. I liked that because it tells the reader exactly what you like to do, fishing. I think to improve your poem you could do is edit a little bit and check the spellings of some words.
Brendan