33 thoughts on “Relationships in Realistic Fiction: Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets

  1. I really enjoyed your video. I liked how you had facts and quotes from the book and you knew what you were talking about. One thing to fix would be to not say um when you don’t know what to say.

  2. I enjoyed viewing your video. I have never read the Harry Potter series, but your summary caught me up. Your pictures gave me a feeling of what the characters looked like and I think you did a really good job on explaining the characters.

  3. Sean, I really enjoyed your presentation, you were very clear and thorough and knew your topic, and I liked how you had quotes from the book and I enjoyed the background pictures. One thing you could change is you could try to read a little better, without misspeaking or saying um, and also putting more enthusiasm in your voice.
    Bran

  4. I enjoyed your video. It seemed like you really knew a lot about your book. I have never read Harry Potter, but after this video, it seemed interesting. I liked the pictures and even though it was hard to record yourself, but good job!

    Lucy

  5. Sean,
    I love your video, you explain the relationships clearly. I liked the summery that explain what the book way about. I have never read the Chamber of Secrets and i would like to read the book.

  6. Dear Sean,
    I really liked your presentation. I read the whole Harry Potter series, but after this I might want to read the series again.

  7. Dear Sean,

    I liked your video, It showed that you liked the book and new a lot about it. I like how you did the relations about Hermine instead of harry. But in the future make sure that your not saying um and like as much in your video. Over all good job.

    From, Troy

  8. I really liked your video because of how you explained what’s going on in the book and how you explained what the characters are like. It shows that you took interest in this book and liked reading it because of how you explained the book. It also shows that you didn’t like recording about the book which I thought was kind of funny

  9. Sean,

    I liked your video because it was not as long as mine (10 mins) and because you did put a lot of evidence from the book. And I liked that you didn’t stumble while you were talking.

    -Dabylicious Danylo

  10. Dear Sean,

    This is a really good summary of the second book in the Harry Potter series. I have read all the books and seen all of the movies and I feel that you did a really good job explaining what goes on in the second book. You went really in depth with the details and I felt like I was reading the book as well. You did great!

    From,
    Ethan

  11. Dear Sean,

    I really enjoyed watching your video. You really made it seem like Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets was a must read (which it is). Watching your video made me want to go pick up the book and read it again. Just if we end up making more video’s try to say um a lot less and try to have less long pauses of you just breathing into the mic.

    From,
    Mason

  12. Dear Sean,

    Your video was brilliant! Some of my favorite parts were all of the pictures you showed and how well you explained it. I also like how you talk about the characters and other characters in the story. Great job!

    From, Lambo šŸ™‚

  13. Sean I really like your video very much. I like that fact that you had a very nice sounding mic and that your video was a perfect 3:00. I think you could improve on not shuddering as much and working on your script.

    -Ben

  14. Sean,
    I really liked your video. It looked like you put a lot of effort into it and you explained the summary of the book very well. I liked how you explained the relationship about Hermaine Granger. One thing to work on is to say the sentences with less ums and pauses. None the less, great work pal.
    John Loo

  15. I really liked your video and how you explained the book. I also finished this book so I understand what you where talking about. You really summarized it well. The relationship question was spoken very well. The only thing I would say it to talk more slowly so we can understand you better.

    From,
    Birch

  16. Sean, I really liked your video. I really liked how you showed the relationships and how Hermione being petrified affected them. The only suggestion that I have is that maybe you should not say um or other filler words as much. Also, you kinda gave away the ending. Try to avoid that next time. šŸ˜‰

    Josh

  17. Dear Sean,

    I sincerely enjoyed you film. I could tell you enjoyed the Harry Potter book and you knew what you were talking about. I thought it was cool how you did the relationship analysis about Hermione instead of Harry, like a mainstreamed person would. For next time though, try to make sure that your not saying filler words like “um” and “like” as much in your video. It will really enhance your presenting skills. All in all, great job, though.
    Max B

  18. Dear Sean,

    I sincerely enjoyed you film. I could tell you enjoyed the Harry Potter book and you knew what you were talking about. I thought it was cool how you did the relationship analysis about Hermione instead of Harry, like a mainstreamed person would. For next time though, try to make sure that your not saying filler words like “um” and “like” as much in your video. It will really enhance your presenting skills. All in all, great job, though.
    From,
    Max B

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