1 thought on “Relationships in Realistic Fiction:Out of My Mind

  1. Katherine,

    I just want to start out saying great job! You really introduced your book amazingly, gave a detailed summary and answered the question “how do relationships affect us?” with supporting detail. I really like how ended the summary with a question so readers will want to pick up the book and start reading. Also in your summary, I liked how you gave a detailed explanation of the characters. To make this even better though, I would suggest that you should add a bit more analysis. I understand what you are trying to tell us readers, but you could further explain how it would make us feel. You could say ” This affects readers emotionally and mentally because…” and then add your reasoning that you said before. Overall, amazing job!! And thanks for your video.
    Emily L.

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