On our first day
Inside a new country
Before a large gate in a small dirt parking lot
Beyond a long hike
Following my family along the trail
Amid a large valley of flowers
Through a large cave
Down to a rushing river
Across a small log
Toward a steep climb
Up the roped trail
Around large boulders
Near the top
Beside a beautiful waterfall
Nice descriptive phrases, Julia. Except, the poem is missing that final line, consisting of the subject and verb. What is it that you did?