As the day passes by I listen to instructions
Before I could say anything I was in the boat traveling to the middle of the ocean
Unlike the other people I did not want to go under the water
As I get ready to go scuba diving they tell me to go in backwards behind the boat
Underneath the surface was a beautiful underwater world
As I look around I see the dive instructor show, catch, and hand me a big spiny pufferfish that was swimming by
After holding the puffer fish I got to hold a spider like crab
Unlike the other divers I got to see an eel swim under me
Beside me was a big venomous lionfish
Among me was field of bright yellow-ish green coral and many tropical fish
Off in the distance I saw a sunken ship
As I get closer to the top I run out of air
Underneath the waves was a stunning underwater world
I dove
Nicely done, Olivia. Just a note: some of your lines were more than prepositional phrases; they were actually sentences. For example: your line: “Off in the distance I saw a sunken ship.” In that line, “off in the distance” is the prepositional phrase. “I saw a sunken ship” is the subject and predicate. So, for this poem, all you needed for the line was “off in the distance.” Look at your other lines and see what parts you could take out as well.