Sophia
Happy, Light some, funny, Joyous
Daughter of my mom and dad, sister of Bianca and Andrew
Lover of animals, family, and trying new things
Who feels Thankful for family everyday, having a good friends, and being able to live life to the fullest
Who finds happiness, spending time with my twin, remembering happy times, and thinking about my family
Who needs my twin, my best friends, my books to help after the long days of schools
Who gives love to the people she adores, too much time watching survivor, and lots of love to my grandmas dog Coco (poodle mix)
Who fears vomit, heights, and the deep ocean
Who would like to see happiness soon spread around the world, my family to always be happy, and good grades
Who enjoys watching survivor, spending time with my siblings, and eating mango sorbet
Who likes to wear thick cotton t-shirts and capris to school, wear my pajamas at home, and on weekends my big lavender sweatshirt to keep me warm.
Born in Stamford, C.T., resident of Easton
Jortner
Dear Sophia,
I like your piece a lot and I think you did a great job overall! I loved each sentence, but one that stood out to me was when you said, “Who likes to wear thick cotton t-shirts and capris to school, wear my pajamas at home, and on weekends my big lavender sweatshirt to keep me warm.” I loved that because it was very descriptive. You might want to use a more variety of phrases and ideas but otherwise it is very good!
Bianca