My dad told me that one of his friends has the corona virus. So now I know two people who have it.
3 thoughts on “Distance Learning Day 6”
Hi Lilah,
I am sorry to hear that one of your father’s friends has the virus; I hope he or she is well. And I know I gave students a lot of freedom in what to publish here, but I do expect more than this. In this piece of writing, you are informing readers that someone you know has the virus; readers would be wondering if this person is healthy enough to fight it or if them getting the virus is cause for serious concern. You also, in your other sentence, say you know someone else who has the virus. Who?
Sincerely,
Mr. Jockers
Hi Lilah,
I am sorry to hear that one of your father’s friends has the virus; I hope he or she is well. And I know I gave students a lot of freedom in what to publish here, but I do expect more than this. In this piece of writing, you are informing readers that someone you know has the virus; readers would be wondering if this person is healthy enough to fight it or if them getting the virus is cause for serious concern. You also, in your other sentence, say you know someone else who has the virus. Who?
Sincerely,
Mr. Jockers
I’m sorry for your dads friend and the other person.
Sorry to hear that hope they get well soon.