Kai,
I like your poem and I really like that you chose to post this not because I assigned you to do it but because you wanted to (I assume). Thank you. I hope others read this and are inspired by it; to write and post just for the sake of writing and posting, and to write poetry.
Sincerely,
Mr. Jockers
p.s. Next time (if there is a next time, which I hope there to be), leave the numbers out of the verses; it reads easier and looks better.
Kai,
I like your poem and I really like that you chose to post this not because I assigned you to do it but because you wanted to (I assume). Thank you. I hope others read this and are inspired by it; to write and post just for the sake of writing and posting, and to write poetry.
Sincerely,
Mr. Jockers
p.s. Next time (if there is a next time, which I hope there to be), leave the numbers out of the verses; it reads easier and looks better.