(DISCLAIMER: THIS IS PART OF A STORY)
I can’t take it anymore said Carlos. We have been stuck in this bunker for nine years now. Ever since covid-19 started nothing has been normal. Come down, Carlos said. Tom, we are lucky we are alive. If Uncle Joe wasn’t so crazy we would have never been able to survive. We are lucky he put the bunker in his will for us. You’re right Tom said. Carlos, we’re lucky but where did he get the money to build this huge bunker? He got the money from his oil company and said the dad. He got five hundred billion dollars and at one point he was even more Rich than Jeff Bezos. After he spent 3/4 of that on this bunker, he was not as rich. Okay said dad. Let’s go to bed. We have a big day tomorrow and I have something to show you.
I like how this little story is funny but serous at the same time. I feel like you could defiantly write a book about this.
I really like how you talked about how you think it will be nine years later. I also like how you left it on a cliff hanger by not telling the reader what the dad is going to show him. I enjoyed reading your free write.
I like how you made it kind of a cliff hanger because I want to know what the dad wants to show them.