Rihanna
Selfless, Caring, Dependable, Loyal
Daughter of Remus and Irlande, sister of Cynthia
Lover of dance, travel, and family
Who feels grateful for her blessings, thankful to have such a supportive family, and blessed for her family
Who finds happiness in dancing, joy in being around family, and excitement in helping people
Who needs support, spicy foods, and her family
Who gives guidance to anyone who needs it, most of my attention to dance, and an older sister figure to kids
Who fears death, mice, and the world at times
Who would like to see the world, my little cousins suceed, and kindness throughout the world
Who enjoys dancing, babysitting, and helping others
Who likes to wear ripped jeans, over-sized sweatshirts, and leggings
Hi Rihanna,
I love your bio-poem. Spicy food is so good I love it. My favorite line you wrote about was the “who feels” line. I thought it was a very heartfelt and meaningful line. It says a lot about who you are, and describes you as a person. One line that could be worked on is the “who would like to see” line. You could be more descriptive. Such as when you said you want to see the world, you could have been more descriptive as what parts of the world specifically. But overall I really enjoyed your poem.
-Lila R